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creating fictional characters

Why Poetry Matters

Rose Is a Rose

Today’s guest post is from Fred Johnson, who is an editor for Standout Books, where he helps authors take their manuscripts from good to perfect. He’s had poetry published in Zetetic, Spark: A Creative Anthology, The Incubator, Iota, Belleville Park Pages, Smoke, and  Spring 14. His personal blog can be found here and he can be found on Twitter as @FredBobJohn. You can also find out more at the Standout Books Blog.

Poetry is big and confusing and I don’t get it. As a form, it’s remarkably fluid—just when I think I’ve grasped what it is and how it works, I’ll discover some poet who throws the whole thing on its head. Whereas contemporary formalists like Glyn Maxwell argue that poetry without strict form is like a table without legs, the bleeding edge throw words all over the page, dismissing grammar, form, spelling, and linear sequence. How do I know where to stand? It’s all too much to keep up with. Continue Reading

Dealing with the Protagonist Who Won’t Talk to You and the Character Who Refuses to Be Cut

CarnavalA couple of years ago I was working on a novel and having the hardest time with the main character. I felt him so strongly, but he wouldn’t talk to me. I could see him clear as day. I knew what kind of music he loved, the exact shade of his green eyes, the way he obsessively rolled his socks. But all I had were those types of details, the ones that could be gleaned through pure observation. He wouldn’t voluntarily share anything else with me—not his past, not his current motivations, and sure as hell not his plans for the future. Continue Reading

Want to Be a Better Writer? Watch More Movies.

SAMSUNGShould writers even bother with movies? Shouldn’t they devote themselves to the written word?

Well, yes.

But the written word falls a little flat without any human element to back it up.


Think about reading an electrical engineering textbook. It’s precise, detailed and descriptive. It fits each piece into the next, in exact order with the most effective explanation. But the human element is missing. No tension or anxiety, no emotion at all.

And this is why electrical engineering textbooks aren’t exactly riveting page-turners.

The best books are bursting with the human element—that sloppy, messy, problematic stuff we call emotion. To see human emotion in action, there is no better place to go than to the movies.

Here are a few valuable things you can take from the cinema and incorporate into your writing:

Facial Expressions
Telling the reader that your characters are angry, or sad, or elated isn’t the most compelling way to present their stories. You can take a lesson from the movies and share what you see playing out across the actors’ faces on screen. For instance, a character in a homicidal rage might roll his eyes around like Jack Nicholson in The Shining—describe those little physical details. Or your character might be cool and confident like Luke Skywalker facing down Jabba the Hutt—describe that slight dangerous smile playing around the corners of Luke’s mouth. Use intuitive character development to gather the images, and then transfer them to paper in your own words.

Pay attention to on-screen arguments and unexpected news. How long does it take for information to sink in and how does the immediate reaction play out? Also pay attention to plot points. How quickly are characters, events, and back story presented within the narrative? For maximum readability, it’s helpful to aim for a story structure that keeps things fresh and exciting for the reader, while maintaining clarity. The best movies make this look easy, study them and learn.

This is the “suspense” factor in an amazing thriller, and the “delicious anticipation” found in a really good romance. Between heroes and villains, and smoking hot lovers, there’s always that magic chemistry that makes readers root for them to be together, or blow each other up. The magic can be found in the way they rub each other the wrong way. Something about that wrong way—to the audience—just feels so right. Carefully watch how the greatest duos interact (Clarice Starling and Hannibal Lecter, for instance) and take notes on what you see.

Setting and Scenery
This one works well as a writing prompt too. Pick a visually striking movie with awesome background scenery (think: Blade Runner or Barry Lyndon) and exercise your creative muscle by describing it on paper. Write about it at length, even if you feel like you’re repeating yourself. Exploring in-depth description of physical place will enhance your command of adjectives, and your ability to transport the reader to a world of your own making.

You can check out the 100 Greatest Movies of All Time to get ideas or make your own list. You can even revisit all the movies that are already your favorites. The key is to watch each movie when you can do so uninterrupted, and maybe even by yourself so that you can pause and/or rewind when you want to reexamine a scene or an actor’s expression. Make some popcorn, get in your comfy chair and remind yourself that this is hard work you’re about to do. After all, it’s essential to your craft to get lost in as many fantasy worlds as you possibly can.

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